Wednesday, 30 October 2013

Freezing Night Ever

It was a freezing snowy cold winter day and all the cows were crowded to stay nice and warm. But one other cow went on wondering around trying to look for something to eat. This cow was called Tim, he didn’t know what was going on and he certainly did not know it  was cold.

Things got more out of hand so the farmer put all of the cows in the shed. Tim was left out in the icy cold breeze, and all the other cows were in the cozy warm shed. “ I knew I should've never wandered around I should've stayed with my mates, if I didn’t go off I wouldn’t be here in first of all” I said to myself.

Tim was feeling hesitated and she slowly went off to sleep. The farmer told the dog to double check if any cows were missing inside the shed. , The dog went on searching he notice number thirteen hundred and fifty was missing. He went outside and saw Tim was lying on the ground frozen. “ woof woof” said the dog The farmer came out running and he picked up Tim and laid him across the brown carpet. He turned on the heater and called the vet, but it cost lots and lots of money.

As soon as the vet arrived she put a special medicine in Tim’s mouth and Tim woke up. The farmer was so happy and Tim was thinking he would never do that ever again.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Meleane,

    Your story was awesome! Tim must've felt really sick! But lucky the farmer told the dog to double check. Keep it up!!


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