Monday, 25 November 2013

Adding details to sentences

Walt: Add different sentence in the beginning, Middle, and end.

I was really glad that  Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence 

Mr Jacobsen who is a very kind guy he was  our coach on the confidence course and we did manage to finish all of the activities.

Peter was our instructor and I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing because I wasn’t listening to Peter  and I never sailed before.

On a sunny day with Branded we went abseiling.

We went up the steep hills and the green puffy bushes and went  abseiling with brenden.

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