Thursday, 1 August 2013

The Three Little Pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs who always lived with their mother. But one  day they no longer lived together because there were old enough.

The first little piglet wern’t  that clever and  went asking people for hay. So the little piglet asked a lovely old lady and lented the hay and some money hand to hand. The piglet went to find a shady spot to build his house and made a excellent start to finish.

Suddenly a big harry ugly wolf said to the piglet “ let me in little pig before I’ll blow your house down said wolf ” “ Not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin squeaked the little piglet”. So the ugly wolf huffed and he puffed and he blew the house away and he ate the little piglet for afternoon tea.

Then the second piglet that was quite clever decided to make his house out of sticks. So the little piglet went to buy some sticks off a man and got started making his house. Then the big bad wolf can smell bacon and said to the piglet “ little pig little pig let me in” “ not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin squeaked the little piglet”. “ Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll huff and blow your house down. Then the big bad wolf ate the little piglet and had a really fat tummy and had blood everywhere on his mouth and hands.

Then the third piglet was much brainier than the other  two were and had cost lots of money. The little piglet made his house out of bricks and took him a long time to build. After all of that the little piglet made a brilliant brick house. Then the ugly wolf came knocking on the door and said “ little pig little pig let me in said the harry wolf”  Not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin squeaked the little piglet” “ then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and blow your house down”. But he did not manage to blow that house down, So the big bad wolf climbed up the roof and he decided to go down the chimney. The wolf did not know that little piglet put a big pot of boiling water down the chimney. So he  slowly went  down the chimney and burned his bottom and little piglet cooked the wolf for dinner.

And little piglet lived happily ever after!!!

1 comment:

  1. For my writing I think I did well at my punctuation and speech marks.
    It will be perfect if I could work on making more paragraphs and making more sense. I need to work on the one main idea and I need to talk about one thing.


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