Adding details to sentences

Walt: Add different sentence in the beginning, Middle, and end.

I was really glad that  Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence 

course.

Mr Jacobsen who is a very kind guy he was  our coach on the confidence course and we did manage to finish all of the activities.

Peter was our instructor and I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing because I wasn’t listening to Peter  and I never sailed before.

On a sunny day with Branded we went abseiling.

We went up the steep hills and the green puffy bushes and went  abseiling with brenden.

Camp Bentzon

Camp Benzon on Kawau Island

Use these 2 sites to answer questions and present on your blog:

Camp Benzon   http://www.campbentzon.co.nz/photos.htm

Kawau Island  http://www.kawauisland.org.nz/index.php?content=generalInfo.htm

WALT: find information from several sites about our upcoming camp at Kawau Island.

Learn Create Share

1. Which cove or harbour is Camp Benzon  in? (clue - Find a map of the island) North cove

2. Copy an image of Kawau Island (a map)  showing the cove or harbour our camp is in.  

3. How many kilometres from the mainland is Kawau Island? (clue - Look at travel information) 8.45k

4. Where do you catch the ferry from (what town) to get to Kawau? (clue - Look at travel information) At the sand spit

5. List 6 activities you can do at camp. (clue - Look camp activities)

volleyball, orienteering, rock climbing, kayaking, swimming, and fishing.  

6. Find out (google) what a ‘burma trail’ is. (clue - search in google)  A Burm a trail is a rope trail through the bush and over obstacles.

7. Find images of 5 native birds common to Kawau island and label them.  (c    

8. How many kayaks are there? (clue - Look camp activities)

24

9. Look at the images in the photo gallary and copy in one picture you are excited about. Write a sentence to explain what you are excited about and why.  I will like to jump off the wharf because I had never jump off one before.

10. What is the main (most predominant) native tree on Kawau (clue - search in flora and fauna on the kawau site - flora means plants)  The predominant native trees on the island are the white flowering kanuka and the manuka.

Next week  we will be off to camp at Kawau Island for the year six camp. I am looking forward to camp because I want to do lots of activities like , volley ball, rock climbing, and kayaking.

Strange Noises

It was five O'clock in the morning time to Shaun the sheep. Jake and his dad went out to the shed and sorted out where to put the sheep. Dad called the other helpers and got started shearing the sheep. One other sheep was acting a little strange.

Jake could hear some strange noises coming out  from the shed. He ran in looked if one of the sheep were in  trouble, all he can see was sheep waiting in line to get shaun. “ Im over hear ” the voice called out again, Jake was freaking out he ran back in the shed. “ Help help” Jake saw one of the sheep was lying on the ground, it didn’t look to good  Dad came out running from the shed, “ Its time for the poor sheep too set off ”. Jake was feeling bad he needed to know who was whispering.

“ Don’t take him take me” the voice cried out again, Jake went off running following where the noise was coming from. He looked to  his right and it was the sheep lying on the grass and still no one was there.

As the man came with the truck he took the sheep away. “ That was a good sheep  Goodbye” said Jake.

Freezing Night Ever

It was a freezing snowy cold winter day and all the cows were crowded to stay nice and warm. But one other cow went on wondering around trying to look for something to eat. This cow was called Tim, he didn’t know what was going on and he certainly did not know it  was cold.

Things got more out of hand so the farmer put all of the cows in the shed. Tim was left out in the icy cold breeze, and all the other cows were in the cozy warm shed. “ I knew I should've never wandered around I should've stayed with my mates, if I didn’t go off I wouldn’t be here in first of all” I said to myself.

Tim was feeling hesitated and she slowly went off to sleep. The farmer told the dog to double check if any cows were missing inside the shed. , The dog went on searching he notice number thirteen hundred and fifty was missing. He went outside and saw Tim was lying on the ground frozen. “ woof woof” said the dog The farmer came out running and he picked up Tim and laid him across the brown carpet. He turned on the heater and called the vet, but it cost lots and lots of money.

As soon as the vet arrived she put a special medicine in Tim’s mouth and Tim woke up. The farmer was so happy and Tim was thinking he would never do that ever again.

Meleane DLO Animation

Meleane DLO Animation from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This is my movie I have created with Asena, Keis, shiruera, and I, we were reading a story with are reading group  about whales with Mr. Somerville. My movie is about how do killer whales hunt their food.